Hanami
Hermits scrawl haiku
under thatched, sun-splintered roofs;
sakura blooming.
Washi
| hermits scrawl haiku
| daub paper mulberry minds
| wolves’ tails inked fractured
Written for Ronovan Writes’ Haiku Challenge, which provided the prompt words “haiku” and “mind.” (The first is dependent on a bit of creative license: mind > head > roof.) “Hanami” refers to viewing parties when cherry trees (sakura) blossom. “Washi” refers to paper traditionally used for artwork and calligraphy.
Remember to try and read the experimental form in various ways; it’s not meant for a straightforward reading. Just as writing is a practice of experimentation, reading must be creative, too.
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Beautiful haiku and great imagery. :)
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Thank you!
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